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stop the clock by ~anelle:iconanelle:



a sea of houses comes rolling in
rusty roofs bending
breaking, crashing
shingles popping like fireworks
(expressing their independence, they die)
while you and I
(nothing more than genetic flotsam, now)
turn our eyes from a shattered-glass snowfall
and dream of the winters of our youth

this will be the end of days

...

this will be clouds folding into the earth
thunderstorms growling from foxholes
rain tumbling from rivers
as a clumsy conflagration stumbles into our skin
stealing our silhouettes
painting our ghosts on walls
(oh, had only we learned such passive resistance)
as you and I
(only numbers and figures, we know)
truly wear our hearts on our sleeves

when the world turns inside out

...

when sandcastles swirl into mountains
only to melt and flatten
until the rock has no wrinkles
when flowers shrink into their stems
like amateur stop-animation
when grass stalks and grandchildren
twist ever upward into smoke


and I no longer have any metaphors
for what the world made me love about you

this will be the end of days
©2009 ~anelle
:iconanelle:

Author's Comments

Something I wrote after my Japan group went to the Hiroshima Peace Memorial Park.

8:15 happens twice in the day.


EDIT 11/01/09: DD?! Oh, wow, you guys. I'm so honored! :heart: Thank you so much! I wondered why I had so many messages when I first logged in. Wow, this just made my day. :) Again, thank you all!

Daily Deviation

Given 2009-11-01

"This will be the end of days," expresses ~anelle in stop the clock. (Featured by ^fllnthblnk)

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:iconformlessforce:
I saw you in the "Literature!" topic... this is very nice! Good choice of words and overall flow. I'll need to make a note to flip through your gallery when I have the time and see if there's anything else I like :]

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:iconanelle:
Wait...I think I just commented on something of yours! XD Small world..er...forum.

Anyway, thank you! :aww:

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The world is the mind precipitated.
~Emerson
:iconformlessforce:
We probably found each other in the same topic, ha.

Or we're both just shamelessly trying to show off our works xP

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:iconanelle:
Lit folk can't afford to have shame on DA. We disappear otherwise. X3

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The world is the mind precipitated.
~Emerson
:iconiiixii:
lol It seems you and Fomlessforce have met. lol
I must agree with her. You do an excellent job of illustrating great destruction with so few words.
The line about "thunderstorms growling from foxholes"
was excellent.
This is also the first time I've ever, yes EVER read a poem on this topic, and you have done a stellar job my friend. :D
You've earned the fave. :)

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But you, well that's another story entirely." ~IIIXII
:iconanelle:
Thank you very much! :aww:

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The world is the mind precipitated.
~Emerson
:iconbekkia:
This is very poignant.
:iconanelle:
Thank you very much (for both your time and the fav)! :heart:

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The world is the mind precipitated.
~Emerson
:iconformlessforce:
I randomly happened to see your comment, and must throw this in-

Formlessforce is not a "her" xP

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:iconiiixii:
lol, Gosh I'm no good at this...lol
I apologize. :P

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"There is no amount of good I can do in my lifetime to be called a good person. Good is a constant pursuit. Day after day.
But you, well that's another story entirely." ~IIIXII

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